I think we are very close! The main edits we needed were for the 100H moisturizer and I'm pretty happy with where we're at. Here is an overview:

1. Wider shot Intro.

   1. Yes, I have added a timelapse intro that sets the scene and shows the product in a more engaging way
      

      

2. Update the label

   1. Yes, this should be correct now
      

      

3. Return to my interior design

   1. Yes: I reworked my machine and toned down the neon color. I did, however, need to keep some of the pink color in order to make the glass jars visible.
      

      

4. Interior shot

   1. Yes! So I ended up rebuilding a lot of the machine in my studio in order to produce a more realistic shot (otherwise, it just felt too 3D)
      

      

5. End with water spilling out.

   1. This is the one weak link for me. Water is just soooo hard to create in 3D and this is about as good as I am going to be able to do. I leave it up to the group to decide if this passes or not.

Here is the updated video with reduced music and more ambient sound:

And here is the same clip without music:

Depending on what feedback comes out, my next steps are fine-tuning audio and the color of the product (which I assume needs some reworking).

Cheers!